Monday 3 August 2009

The Coming of Age

[A haiku on turning twenty.]

You said, I followed:
You fed, I swallowed..of yore.
Ah! not any more!

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

great one!!
but haiku is four liner na??
anyway what does it matter!! good one.

- prasad vaidya

Anonymous said...

Thanks!
From what i know, it's seventeen syllables written in three lines divided into 5-7-5. But then there are too many more rules, which i haven't followed. Then again, wasn't that what the haiku was about?! ;)

Anonymous said...

exactly
- prasad